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SAIL AWAY

by roovacrag 

Posted: 07 May 2004
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Sail away to the land of love
not sure what you will find
look to the stars above
forget,last loves go on.

Go towards the mists
soon evaporated
find yourlover
otherwise
segregated
forever.






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miffle at 21:25 on 07 May 2004  Report this post
Alice, lovely poem...'stars' yes, they are always with you and yes, also the place where man has looked since time began for direction, guidance... Also the place where romantics and dreamers look... 'mists', yes walking into the unknown but the unknown becomes familiar when the mists lift... we are all walking into the mists of time... A strong contrast between the words 'sail away' and 'segregated'... Write on, Nikki :-)
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Beanie Baby at 23:21 on 13 May 2004  Report this post
"Go towards the mists, soon evaporated" I love this line. It is so beautiful, almost haunting. Lovely piece of work, Alice.
All the best.
Beanie.
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The Walrus at 14:54 on 14 May 2004  Report this post
Very ethereal, like it Stan.

The Walrus
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