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Out of Reach
Posted: 03 July 2004
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To be under this spell
is driving me insane,
for everything that I
now desire,
shall be forever where it
lays.
There it stays – just
out of reach.
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 poemsgalore at 17:02 on 03 July 2004
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Magic Rai, life is a long string of "If only" and "What if". You have captured the frustration of not being able to achieve your dreams. Reminds me of a couple of lines in Ruby Tuesday by the Stones, "Lose your dreams and you will lose your mind - ain't life unkind".
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Rai15 at 17:06 on 03 July 2004
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Ah yes, the forever words of the Stones, I too am a fan - wouldn't have guessed it really :).
Anyways, thank you very much, good to know it does what it's supposed to. Thanks.
-Rai-
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olebut at 17:39 on 03 July 2004
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Rai
you never cease to amaze me so much talent and perception in one so young :)
equally ' yesterday don't matter when it's gone'
take care
david
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Rai15 at 18:26 on 03 July 2004
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Thank you very much David, it means a lot, and the 'yesterday...' line always sticks in my head, very similar to a family motto.
Again, thank you,
-Rai-
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roovacrag at 20:29 on 03 July 2004
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Rai, as David said you amaze us all for one so young, with so much talent .
Don't waste your talent ,put it to your own good.
Keep writing and one day you will be published.
xx Alice
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Lawrenco at 23:05 on 07 July 2004
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Wise simple and true .An uncluttered enjoyable piece .
Found it to be quite meditive.
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