That Night
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Rai15
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Posted: 05 July 2004 Word Count: 71 Summary: This is the second version, revision were by 'olebut' - this version sounds better, I think. |
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On my left wrist,
a beaded bracelet;
shiny silver, pearly white
two sets, three parts.
I fiddle with it constantley,
in position it must be,
I turn it around my wrist,
until it’s just right.
It reminds me of you,
I kept playing with it
that night you looked after me
and cheered me up.
The face of a friend,
of someone special,
there is a reminder,
on my left wrist.
a beaded bracelet;
shiny silver, pearly white
two sets, three parts.
I fiddle with it constantley,
in position it must be,
I turn it around my wrist,
until it’s just right.
It reminds me of you,
I kept playing with it
that night you looked after me
and cheered me up.
The face of a friend,
of someone special,
there is a reminder,
on my left wrist.
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