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by Rai15 

Posted: 26 August 2004
Word Count: 40
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You’re so right,
and I’ve been so very wrong.

You’re so beautiful,
where I am merely dull.

You’re so clever,
as I just fail.

You’re so wonderful,
I don’t deserve your presence.

You’re so witty,
when I am just sarcastic.






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poemsgalore at 13:15 on 28 August 2004  Report this post
A very cutting piece Rai, the last line says it all for me, all those things you said with a wry smile on your face. Very nice.
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