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Hampstead 1987

by Powis 

Posted: 26 August 2004
Word Count: 365
Summary: Louis's Tea Room. Is it still there? One of the poems I based on an overheard conversation one day. Mother and daughter, and the daughter doing all the talking.


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There, you see, you managed a little walk.
I told you, didn't I? Look at the rain,
it's almost tropical. Nonsense, you need
the exercise. Waitress! Busy little thing.
It's amazing how they squeeze us all in.
Now, tea or coffee? No, they're far too rich
for you. A scone, perhaps? Coffee, please,
black, but not too strong. No gateaux, no.
You've changed your mind. I thought you might.
Two coffees, yes. Now don't start, please!



With a daughter in school, a son in Hong Kong,
Brandy under the rosebed, and Gerald, gone,
she often found herself here, talking to Mother.
She adored the little trays they served
the tea on, the doomed upholstery, the past.
Not English, no, European, Hungarian perhaps.
She tried to discriminate, as Gerald
would have wished. But the Cutlers liked it here.
And Mother wouldn't meet her anywhere else.
Besides, anywhere else was an empty house.


I'm disgusted with her. She could have picked
the phone up, any evening after six.
Just to let me know if nothing else. Waitress!
I need a chemist, and I must catch the post.
Quentin, of course. I can't afford to ring!
Hong Kong isn't England, you know.
I do wish they'd hurry up and leave it
to the Chinese. They deserve it, after all.
Ah, here we are. Sugar? Mother, really,
you haven't listened to a word I've said.



Mother never listened, hadn't for years,
and now she was deaf. Deaf to what mattered -
the Insomnia, the Alcohol, the Chinks…
The three R's, as Gerald always said.
Dear Gerald, rotten with politics,
cancer, defeat. She tried to forget, but
memory flared, abrupt, malarial.
That ghastly business in the yellow press.
And he loved the Chinese. He was Chinese!
She organised the milk, while Mother poured.


The ingratitude! I mean, we tried to help.
What else are empires for? More milk, perhaps?
I did ask, didn't I? How does who cope?
Scotch, I expect, and a full-time nanny,
of course. Heavens, it's almost twenty-past,
you might have said. He'll never forgive me
if I don't catch the post. Waitress!
Poor little thing. Attractive though.
Not English, no. Iranian, perhaps…
Another revolution, I suppose.






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joanie at 08:25 on 27 August 2004  Report this post
Powis, I really enjoyed this. I can picture the scene; I can never resist listening to conversations like this; they are always fascinating!

There is such a lot in here, so many subtleties, that I shall have to keep reading again.

joanie

anisoara at 08:39 on 27 August 2004  Report this post
Powis,

This is marvellous. Just marvellous. I love the structure, with the one-sided conversation in italics and the thought stream in regular type. I do need to read through again to try to match bits up, because there's a lot going on, but I just wanted to register my immediate reaction, which is strong and very positive.

Ani

roovacrag at 20:21 on 27 August 2004  Report this post
Powis I really liked this. Like listening in to a conversation. A nice change,so refreshing.

Well done.

xx Alice

olebut at 09:44 on 30 August 2004  Report this post
Powis
I think you have demonstrated well the images that you can extract form every day occurences and turn them into a fine poem. You have also demonstarted the value of keen observation. I tried a similar excercise with my poem 'Down our street- on the front step'

your piece captures so well the everyday

well done

david

Myrtle at 08:24 on 15 January 2006  Report this post
Hi Powis,

Picked this up on the Random Read... It's a very interesting piece, with plenty to think about on second reading, and it captures a type perfectly. The patisserie is still there and exactly the same - I laughed at the line about how they fit everyone in.

Thanks, I enjoyed this for lots of reasons.

Myrtle


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