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Posted: 29 August 2004
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Lay on the ground
corn all around
looking up at sky of blue,
all I think of is you.
Turn over, tufts rough
picking the the corn ears not enough,
summer sun over and done
think our love was just a summer sun.
Harvest comes,harvest goes.
Not good we all know,
another year another love,
no change in the sky above.
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 joanie at 19:08 on 29 August 2004
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Alice, a lovely thought, to be lying in the corn looking up at the sky. Mixed feelings of contentment and resignation to losing something special. another year, another love - I hope not!
joanie
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 The Walrus at 20:27 on 29 August 2004
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I love the way you have captured the paradoxical essence of how everything changes and yet, stays the same.
Simple, succinct and effective, as always.
Red
xx
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roovacrag at 20:33 on 29 August 2004
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Joan I used to love laying in the corn and looking up at the sky as a child. Might be how I started to paint or write.who knows.
xx Alice
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The Walrus at 20:43 on 29 August 2004
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Name me a man/woman that you know who can put their hand on their heart and say this Stan. I know of none. However, this piece is, I hope, is a tribute to every person who rises to the daily challenges of life, if you like, a celebration of man's indefatigable spirit.
Red
xx
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oops, have appear to have commented on the wrong poem lol. x
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Seahorse at 21:45 on 31 August 2004
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Lovely and clear, very moving. Passions come and go. Life moves on.
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Lawrenco at 08:48 on 01 September 2004
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It`s Like Love is a seasonal thing ,
Kind of expresses that love never really goes away ,just becomes reborn into the next person you meet who you feel that for.
A great anecdote for those who have just split from a relationship.
Great wisdom here .Keep it in your emotional medicine cabinet.
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roovacrag at 12:34 on 01 September 2004
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Patrick,true love never dies it waits for you. I have never stopped loving but then I have never looked for someone else. As you say,till the next person and you might find a similar love again.
xx Alice
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