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Just One Day

by Carlton 

Posted: 25 October 2004
Word Count: 57

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Just One Day

Is life a lifetime
Or can we live a life in just one day
An hour, a moment, a fleeting glance
Is enough for me to say
That meteorite, that cosmic blow
One night you swung my way
For me a lifetime long will last
Though you passed in just one day

Carlton Sorrento

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Lottie at 21:05 on 25 October 2004  Report this post

I enjoyed reading this piece, it's one that has made me think with it's powerful end.

Lottie :-)

Tuppence at 23:01 on 25 October 2004  Report this post
short,sweet,2 the point if only we could all be so succint

The Walrus at 12:47 on 26 October 2004  Report this post
Perhaps our lives are made up of a series of microcosms? Interesting thought.

Enjoyed reading and wondering about this piece.

The Walrus

roovacrag at 12:53 on 26 October 2004  Report this post
Carlton..Takes just a moment to fall in love and lifetime being lovers. Enjoy life to the full,you only get one shot at it. Believe me,love is worth the wait and worth the passion that follows.

xx Alice

Don Gorgon at 17:58 on 26 October 2004  Report this post
Nice one Carlton. A day to us may be be a lifetime to others and vice versa - this is what it's saying to me. Nice works!



Chem at 18:07 on 26 October 2004  Report this post

I enjoyed this very much. We can have the most life altering things happen to us in just one day which can shape the rest of our lives.

Great poem.

Carlton at 09:27 on 29 October 2004  Report this post
I am glad you all liked this one. Thanks.

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