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Formaldehyde love.

by PaulAnthony 

Posted: 30 October 2004
Word Count: 197


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I guess it always seemed to me that things would always last
And possibly that’s the only way to appreciate the past
I always believed that the schoolboy dreams I held as true
Were my perfect reflection of everything I thought was you
The smell of life adores me as a touch of cloth reminds
That my lost feelings of remembrance are payment in kind.
The marathon of life has but barely crossed the line, as I
question the shoes I’m wearing and whether they’re mine.
I know the life I’m living and the cross I choose to bear,
But the salt with which it soothes my wounds is clear and always there.
I never choose the path I walked but knew the road was still
And pointed a direction which humbled my free will.
A good party’s a collection of people who try to be at one,
Forgetting who's the birthday boy, who’s the prodigal son.
I will always love the thing that rests upon my painted brow
And the symbolism of that beast, the way and the how.
That somehow everything we feel is real and from above
Not some earthly creation like formaldehyde love.






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Okkervil at 09:33 on 01 November 2004  Report this post
Great piece with excellent flow (although some of the lands don't scan quite as well as the others- not fitting the rythm that you've established.. maybe it's just how I'm reading it)... anyways, I like it lots- stagnating while still being perfectly preservered, it's sad, but I guess there's hope in the narrator's recognition of the situation.

liked-

A good party’s a collection of people who try to be at one,
Forgetting whose the birthday boy, who’s the prodigal son.


though shouldn't that 'whose' be 'who's' aswell?

Anyways, thanks!


James


PaulAnthony at 12:10 on 01 November 2004  Report this post
Thanks James. Glad you enjoyed it.

The Walrus at 18:14 on 01 November 2004  Report this post
Interesting musings - something personal but universal at the same time. Need to read it again, but I like it very much, particularly:

I know the life I’m living and the cross I choose to bear,
But the salt with which it soothes my wounds is clear and always there.

The Walrus

PaulAnthony at 00:57 on 02 November 2004  Report this post
Thanks for your thoughts. It is to me very univesal and certainly not my personal feelings, perhaps that makes it weaker as a statement but truer as a sentiment.

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sorry universal


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