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Soul Journey

by Leahmay 

Posted: 15 June 2003
Word Count: 153

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"Soul Journey"

Beautiful are memories
of a moonlit night with you,
The spark of love rekindled
when all the world was new.

My heart told me I'd known you
in times so long ago,
For something deep inside
had set my soul aglow.

As I looked into your eyes
I knew you felt it too,
The longing grew between us
just like it used to do.

You took my hand in yours
I felt a burning flame,
Such a familiar feeling
I knew from whence it came.

Inside my spirit soared
to heights that once we knew
And through the mists of time
I recalled my love for you.

Soul mates re-united,
bound by the ties of past,
Through each and every age
this perfect love would last

So at our journey's end
when the time has come to part,
Somewhere a silver cord
will link us heart to heart.

2002 Marian Jones

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Anna Reynolds at 12:35 on 22 August 2003  Report this post
Really sweet and tender- and a lovely last couple of lines.

old friend at 21:57 on 20 September 2003  Report this post
Hello Marian,

I have absolutely no appreciation of what makes Poetry 'good', therefore I can offer no criticism, no 'constructive suggestions', nor any 'helpful hints and tips'.

However I did enjoy your words - very nice.

I have the feeling that young adults might not appreciate the sincerity and simplicity of your words.
old friend, Len

libera at 21:31 on 09 August 2004  Report this post
hi there
i love this, i grapple with writing about love and usually it comes out in a mess! yours flows freely, not undermining love at all mind, but showing that it can be smooth and simple as well as complicated and heartbreaking. a pleasure to read. it gives one hope!
all the best, libera

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