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by cleaver_smith 

Posted: 15 November 2004
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I met a man once
who told me a great secret
and this
I will share with you,
if you are good.

He said: "Wisdom is a path less trodden
if the road before
was level."

That's what he said, I swear.
Short and to the point, I suppose
and if it don't kill you
it makes you stronger

That's one of my own
I threw that in.

For what it's worth.

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joanie at 22:08 on 15 November 2004  Report this post
Clever, cleaver. It has made me re-read a few times. Mmm.... I like your mix of ancient-type wisdom and everyday down-to-earth common sense. I can hear you adding, "Take it or leave it!"

I enjoyed this!


The Walrus at 12:37 on 17 November 2004  Report this post
I like it! Great tone and style, and, of course solid message.

The Walrus

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