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Monkey Prayers

by John G.Hall 

Posted: 27 November 2004
Word Count: 57
Summary: I bless the branch you dropped from...


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Monkey Prayers


Our banana
who art in yellow
hallowed be thy root,
thy jungle come
thy seed be sown
from earth as
it is in canopy,
give us our
banana falls,
and forgive us
our restlessness,
as we forgive
those that wrestle
against us,
and lead us not
into wildlife
reservations,
but deliver us
fresh weevils.

Amen.






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youngskywalker at 14:23 on 27 November 2004  Report this post
interesting piece,
but methinks you seem to have missed a line,
maybe "give us each day a trip in a jalopy"
just a thought,
youngskywalker.


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that'll do nicely, LOL,
youngskywalker

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"for wine is a drink, son,
a good bottle and a story,
and tickled with a feather."

you got me at it now,LOL,




juleschoc at 17:24 on 27 November 2004  Report this post
This was great. very humorous!!!! makes me want to try one for different things like erm...dentists, teachers, frogs, mice, addicts and yes..even writers!!!!!

Jules

juleschoc at 17:26 on 27 November 2004  Report this post
P.S. OUR PEN
WRITE ART FOREVER
HALLOWED BE MY NAME.....

How's that for a start??????

Don Gorgon at 22:20 on 29 November 2004  Report this post
As someone who reads the Holy Bible daily, I think that is just brilliant John! I'll never read or hear the Lords' Prayer the same again! HE will have enjoyed reading it! Nice one!

Thanks

Don


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