The Problem With Me - Revised/Extended by Courtney S Hughes

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The Problem With Me - Revised/Extended

by Courtney S Hughes

Posted: 01 December 2004
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Summary: Originally this was just a sample monologue I had put on the writewords site but the response was so encouraging that I developed it into a full play. I hope you all like it, if you have any ideas as to whom I should send it to then please let me know.

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Jubbly at 20:50 on 01 December 2004 Report this post

Hi Courtney,

This is the first time I've come across this and I really enjoyed it. I don't know if your formatting is intentional but it works for me. The short sentences give the piece a very distinct rythmn which is great, thearically. It's certainly a very challenging work for an actor. You would need a good director to keep up the pace and provide innovative staging. There's a lovely dry humour running through out and I feel you could bring out even more at key moments. You have a surprising turn of phrase, 'babies on leads and dogs pushing prams' that delight the reader. I'm very intrigued as to what you do next with it.

all the best

Jubbly

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