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Old Familiar

by John G.Hall 

Posted: 12 December 2004
Word Count: 21
Summary: Sometimes a short hits the spot

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Old Familiar

my familiar beer
pours into a tall
pimpled glass

a black lantern
shining beneath
a flaming tap

John G.Hall(C)2004

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joanie at 14:14 on 12 December 2004  Report this post
John, as far as I'm concerned, a short ALWAYS hits the spot. I love them.

I enjoyed this.


poemsgalore at 18:15 on 13 December 2004  Report this post
I like the idea of a pimpled glass, or did you mean dimpled? Is it a Guinness. That's what I thought of when you said:
a black lantern
shining beneath
a flaming tap

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