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Eternal Angel

by conker.com 

Posted: 31 December 2004
Word Count: 151
Summary: I wrote this piece in 2000. I now know that It came from a corruption of feelings that I had for the past and at the time of writing. In many ways it now seems it was somewhat predictive. This will remain a special piece to me and I dedicate it as I always have done to the one person who meant so much to me. I hope anyone reading it appreciates it.

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One night an angel held me
within her arms so tight
she protected me from danger
from worry,fear and fright.
Her beauty took my breath away
as she eased my aching heart
but I realised then she was just a dream
and one day would depart.

I now need her more than ever
to be near me night and day
to hear the words of love I have
and wish the chance to say.
To feel the touch of her soft hand
see her smile and feel her near
will give me every second I need
to express my love so dear.

Eternal angel if you hear these words
just let me know you're there
please just give me one more sign
to show me that you care.
To me your love means everything
and I'm sure you will always be
my one and only true love
from now to eternity

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roovacrag at 21:52 on 31 December 2004  Report this post
Conker welcome to WW.
A truly well written poem.
Out of the 6 stanza I am not sure which I liked the most.
You have put your heart and soul into it.

Well done .

xx Alice

Tina at 08:00 on 01 January 2005  Report this post
Welcome to WW - a great place to share poetry - I think they should use this as a slogan!!

Liked your work and hope your angel is still holding your hand.

Good luck in the new Year with your poems.

Don Gorgon at 12:15 on 01 January 2005  Report this post
Lovely poem conker.com. I know what you're saying here, 'There can be only one!', but try not to let it become like a 'self-fulfilling prophecy', it has for me!

Nice works

Peace and Love


conker.com at 08:32 on 04 January 2005  Report this post
To Alice, Tina & Don

Firstly may I wish you a very happy new year.

Thank you for your positive comments on this poem. The piece means so much to me and although I wrote it five years ago, I still enjoy reading it even now. It has so many explanations it it and I still find it strangely comforting. I am actually very proud of this piece together with "The cost of lost love" and if I never write again I will be happy with my lot.

Take care all and thanks again.


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