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Majestic

by joanie 

Posted: 13 February 2005
Word Count: 14
Summary: The sea was wild today!
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White plumes of spray flirt -
ferries are abandoned whilst
waves turn into air






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jewelsx at 23:57 on 13 February 2005  Report this post
beautifully said!

i don't know what to say about it apart from that it works really well and that it is a great haiku

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joanie at 06:52 on 14 February 2005  Report this post
Thanks, jewelsx!

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laurafraser at 14:54 on 14 February 2005  Report this post
i like this a lot, gives me an image of the galloping white stallions in the guines advert "white plumes.."-there is a friskiness to it that perfectly encapsulates the energy of the waves
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joanie at 21:46 on 14 February 2005  Report this post
Thank you Laura. Your comment is better than my Haiku!

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The Walrus at 20:24 on 15 February 2005  Report this post
A visually strong piece Joanie, reflecting the power of the sea.

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joanie at 11:42 on 16 February 2005  Report this post
Thank you 'The Walrus'.

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