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Moving on

by joanie 

Posted: 03 March 2005
Word Count: 19
Summary: A very quick exercise in Poetry Seminar.
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Go and open the door to the rest of your life.

Fling it wide
hurry in
don't look back.







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Nell at 10:05 on 04 March 2005  Report this post
Joanie, short and to the point, and good advice. Maybe I'll print it out and stick it on the computer where I can see it. If it weren't for the restrictions of the exercise it would be interesting to make the first line the last.


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Mac AM at 10:06 on 04 March 2005  Report this post
You don't know how true this is - I've just come back from walking the dogs! Very positive uplifting feel.

Mac
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joanie at 12:13 on 04 March 2005  Report this post
Thank you ladies! I thought it was a bit short but any attempts to lengthen it were met with resistance!

joanie
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roovacrag at 15:27 on 04 March 2005  Report this post
Joan..you did this just right,not too long .
short,but to the point.
Enjoyed it my friend.

xx Alice
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joanie at 17:58 on 04 March 2005  Report this post
Thanks, Alice.

Joan
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poemsgalore at 18:35 on 04 March 2005  Report this post
AS said before, good advice, could take this as literary advice, move on to the next piece of work, the next idea. Very thought provoking.
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joanie at 08:10 on 05 March 2005  Report this post
Thanks, Kathleen. Appreciate the response.

joanie
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