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Top Gear Haiku

by joanie 

Posted: 21 May 2005
Word Count: 20
Summary: The excitement is just unbelievable! I bet it's the first time Jeremy Clarkson's appeared in a haiku.


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Sunday, eight o'clock;
my husband is ecstatic.
Jeremy Clarkson.

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Toyota Aygo
playing five-a-side football.
Big boys with their toys.






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Nik Perring at 03:03 on 22 May 2005  Report this post
Brilliant Joanie! Genius! I think you're right - I'll bet JC hasn't appeared in Haiku before (I'd also bet he didn't know what it was as well!). Great, simple piece, offering us a glimpse into everyday life and making the mundane interesting.
Cheers,
Nik.

jewelsx at 17:47 on 22 May 2005  Report this post
this just proves you can make anything into a Haiku all you need is the inspiration!
Jewelsx

joanie at 20:49 on 22 May 2005  Report this post
Thanks, Nik and jewelsx! Having just watched part of it, I have to add another bit!!

joanie

Ticonderoga at 14:49 on 23 May 2005  Report this post
Spot on! Everything 'male' that absolutely eludes me is summed up.


Best,

Mike

joanie at 17:48 on 23 May 2005  Report this post
Thanks for reading, Mike.

joanie

Beanie Baby at 12:05 on 26 May 2005  Report this post
This really made me smile. Brilliant!]

Beanie

joanie at 15:22 on 26 May 2005  Report this post
Thanks, Beanie!

joanie


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