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  • Is there a doctor is the house?
    by geoffmorris at 22:39 on 10 February 2008
    Here's a section is which my MC tries to explain his condition. Unless my research is way off it's pretty accurate in terms of the medical aspects but does it hit the spot in terms of readability? How easy on the eye is it?

    Thanks in advance of giving it a look

    Memories are made like this

    Cheers

    Geoff
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