Hi guys, the next section of The Wings is in the archive. I haven't started making changes based on the suggestions you've all made yet, so this may have many of teh same faults.I'm going to get the whole draft done and then work it over again. Cheers, Sharon

http://www.writewords.org.uk/archive/6482.asp

Hi Sharon, I really do want read this but am afraid I'm just about to embark on a major rewrite of City of Dreams (taking it in a slightly different, more dramatic direction), so apologies in advance if it takes me a while.

Adele.

Sharon, Very nice and I shall read more of your work. Len