Random Read
The harvest of the sea by pene


New Members

  #Tanmoy? (8/2)
  Alisasa (8/2)
  jenren (8/2)
  CuddlyDuddly (6/2)
  Liza (6/2)


Writewords Forums » Introduce Your Work » A birthday wish
Email a friend!Tell a friend
  A birthday wish  Hugh26 at 21:56 on 04 November 2009
 

Hi, I have just posted a short story in the archive section. Link below:

http://www.writewords.org.uk/archive/24413.asp

Would love to get some feedback on it so that I can give it another revision.

Thanks

Hugh
  Re: A birthday wish  NMott at 22:16 on 04 November 2009
 

Hi Hugh and welcome to WriteWords.

It's usually best to upload the story in one of the writing groups for feedback - I see you've joined lash Fiction II, but there's also the Short Story Group if prefer:
http://www.writewords.org.uk/groups/68.asp


- NaomiM

<Added>

lash fiction, oops, fraudian slip there.

  Re: A birthday wish  GaiusCoffey at 22:57 on 04 November 2009
 

"Fraudian"? Clear indication of both the disdain for a school of thought and proof of its validity.

  Re: A birthday wish  cherys at 09:43 on 05 November 2009
 

I like Lash Fiction. It's a belter!
  Re: A birthday wish  NMott at 10:06 on 05 November 2009
 

Lol Cherys.

Fraudian


Too true, Gaius. I probably had in mind 'fraulein' and her whip.

  Re: A birthday wish  Jem at 10:35 on 05 November 2009
 

Am loving Lash Fiction! Who's going to propose a new group???
  Re: A birthday wish  Hugh26 at 13:38 on 05 November 2009
 

Thanks Naomi. Will join up with the short fiction group.

Hugh
  Re: A birthday wish  NMott at 14:25 on 05 November 2009
 

short fiction group


Dying to tell a midget joke but I'd probably get into trouble.


So, what sort of uploads do you envisage in a Lash Fiction group, Jem?

<Added>

midget


I mean 'Staturally challenged'.

Actually I mean a very short joke.

Hmmm, exactly how deep does this hole get?

<Added>

Maybe we should have a group for puns and anecdotes, and blitz the Readers Digest.