Hi!

I've not been as active a member on this community in recent years as I used to be due to demands of full-time work and full-time story, but I hope I can still count on some help in a time of need!

Would anyone be so kind as to read through a story I just uploaded?

Careers Day

It's for a Writing for Radio module, and while I know I need to work on making it more mind-visible for a radio audience at this stage I would like to know if the story arc works. Is it satisfying? Are there any sections which drag, or any you would like to see expanded?

Your help would be much appreciated.

Kind regards

Ben

Whoops, link error.


http://www.writewords.org.uk/archive/28682.asp

that should work.