Can anyone explain the basic rules of that phrase? I know its a silly question but I am not quite sure how to know if my writing is overloaded with explanations. How can you spot the errors of telling rather than showing when you're re-reading a draft?

Thanks
Sarah

This is a pretty good definition:

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Show,_Don't_Tell

Cath






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Or if you're still not sure with reference to your own writing, post a section you have doubts about and ask people to comment on your showing vs. telling.

Sarah, there was a thread on this not long back started by Davy Skyflyer, I think. Can't remember the title but a search might pick it up.

Emma

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Try this:

http://www.writewords.org.uk/forum/65_71602.asp

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Yes, that Wikipedia article is a good, clear explanation of the basics.

That was an enormous help, thank you Cath and Emma.