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Please forgive any odd spaces or gaps - I lifted this from a Publisher file, where the words fit round the pictures. Aimed at 4-7s 

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formatting has come out a bit dodgy - just ignore strange indents or lack of! 

I know this is probably too long. Also need to find the 'voice' and smooth over plot details to give an overall picture... but how?! 

So the project is back on again :) Graded reading books for primary school age 

Quite a short chapter (hacked it a lot) - might end up combining is with the next one. 

No title yet! Calling it 'Specs' for the time being. Need your comments esp on pov as the chapters progress. 

Jumps to a different set of characters in a different location. Back to Barnaby in Chapter 3 

back with Barnaby's pov - not sure how the formatting will come out, with the eye test chart. Hope you can read what it says! 

historical fiction for 11+ I've only done the first draft so far, and by writing the synopsis, I hope to clarify the plot points. But I'm rubbish at synopses, so any comments gratefully received! I know it's a tad long, but I'm trying to get it all in. Does it make sense? Where do you feel the holes are? 

Can you glean any more of Eliza's character from this? 

short story aimed at WW. 

for younger readers (probably 9-12 

next installment - all comments appreciated