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Name Nicole Lee
User Name fbtoast
Home Page www.theoreticalheuristics.blogspot.com
Specialism Fiction
Location London

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Chosen - Chapter 27 by fbtoast Word Count: 1509
7  Comments

Now this is a seminal chapter and various people have told me to get rid of the man jumping from the train, because it simply isn't explained in the book - although it's hinted at. The whole incident basically points outside the book to the next one and to the parallel worlds context which isn't really covered in this one. Does it work? Do I really have to get rid of the jump from the train? It's central to my whole idea of the book. 
22 Oct 2009

Chosen Chapter 26 by fbtoast Word Count: 1666
10  Comments

Hope this chapter doesn't seem too much like telling and not showing! 
17 Oct 2009

Chosen - Chapter 25 by fbtoast Word Count: 1149
8  Comments

transition too abrupt from the last chapter? Neve and Efa turning up a bit implausible? 
19 Sep 2009

Chosen - Chapter 24 by fbtoast Word Count: 1784
9  Comments

tell me, can you tell from this chapter how it was that Corny was able to meet him at the gate, or do I need to spell it out more explicitly? 
14 Sep 2009

Chosen - Chapter 23 by fbtoast Word Count: 1784
10  Comments

moving on swiftly... 
21 Aug 2009

Chosen - Chapter 22 by fbtoast Word Count: 2231
6  Comments

is there a point to this chapter or is it simply mystifying? 
15 Aug 2009

Chosen - Chapter 21 by fbtoast Word Count: 2211
8  Comments

A change of scene 
12 Aug 2009

Chosen - Chapter 20 by fbtoast Word Count: 804
5  Comments

very short chapter. I have problems with my chapter breaks! 
3 Aug 2009

Charlie - last bit by fbtoast Word Count: 1971
6  Comments

This is all I've written, and I'm afraid there's an awful lot of shagging in this portion. Do let me know if I should carry on - with the book, not the shagging! 
5 Jul 2009

Charlie - even more by fbtoast Word Count: 1648
6  Comments

Here's another gobbet of Charlie for bedtime reading! 
29 Jun 2009

Charlie - yet more by fbtoast Word Count: 1685
3  Comments

nothing much happens in this bit, but here it is, anyway 
27 Jun 2009

Charlie - more by fbtoast Word Count: 1323
3  Comments

 
25 Jun 2009

Charlie cont. by fbtoast Word Count: 1389
8  Comments

There's a certain amount of sex in this - hope it doesn't make you want to nominate me for that Bad Sex Writing award! 
22 Jun 2009

Charlie by fbtoast Word Count: 1084
5  Comments

here's a little romantic thing I've been fiddling around with, no need to comment, just thought it might entertain 
19 Jun 2009

Safari by fbtoast Word Count: 1852
9  Comments

for a little light relief, here's the beginning of a chicklitty thing I did one day when I was pondering how annoying it is that heroines always have interesting jobs rather than the crappy dull ones people actually have... 
6 May 2009



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