TheGodfather

I dramatically reworked this one, took the proverbial hatchet to it, taking much of what was said to heart. Your thoughts invited. 

I am really working on developing my writing style and skill. Thanks in advance for reading it. All comments are welcome. 

Two friends who date the same girl on the way to Florida. I wrote this a few years back in college. I thought I'd get your feedback. 

A Dr. Seussish Tale 

Something funny I noticed about Californians 

This is a bit of nostalgia and grief. Your thoughts are welcome. 

Be brutally constructive. 

Thanks for reading and for any suggestions and comments you are able to leave. 

Does the universal theme break through clear enough? 

Stereotypes are what we are made of. 

A slightly experimental piece. Be tough on me. 

Is it the misfortunes of the world that make me fortunate? 

Interested in your thoughts on the story. I know it's a tad long, but give it a chance. I think it's a good little story. Let me know if there any parts that don't feel like they belong? 

I had some fun with this one. 

All comments are welcome, but I'm especially looking to see if you enjoy reading this, if the theme is forthcoming enough (not cluttered with asides), and if the writing is quality. 

There is art all around us. We create it whether we like it or not, good or bad. 

An operating room 

A man's poem written in apology for inferring/stating/blundering that his woman had a large rear end. 

I am really working on developing my writing style and skill, so I apologize that this is a tad bit longer. Thanks in advance for reading it. All comments are welcome. 

I've taken out the previous bold section so that new readers are not influenced. I think the title says it all, but perhaps I must have the characters explain more. 

I've worked this one over. It's getting there. 

I am very interested in your comments on this one. Shoot at me.